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The Sword

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Once upon a time, there was a woman. This woman was in love with a man, who was in love with her as well. She was walking about one day, and a man other than the one she was in love with, saw her and instantly fell deeply in love with her. He Tried to win her over by giving her jewels. The Garnet (Mercury), The White Jade (Venus), The Emerald (Earth), The Diamond (Moon), The Red Ruby (Mars), The Pearl Necklace (Asteroid Belt), The Ambers (Jupiter & Saturn), and The Sapphires (Uranus & Neptune). She became angry with the man, and spun all of his gift into the sky. Her love challenged the man to a duel. The man tried and tried, but he just couldnt win, they were equally matched. Then suddenly his sword was flung from his grip, and the mans spirit, feeling such despair at losing, went with it. Now the man resides in the sky with his trusty sword, wondering how he could've lost.
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J4ckL1n3's avatar
Very creative...I like it :D especially how you used gemstones to represent the planets